*Squee!* Yay! More of this fic! And oooh, developments! Everyone's called in! I hope the next part is available soon. :-D
That being said, I *love* all the character development you've provided here, the hints of underlying incidents, the variances in the connection between John and Ace. I enjoyed every minute of their conversation, and would have been happy to read pages more of it. Brava!
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Date: 2013-08-15 04:40 am (UTC)That being said, I *love* all the character development you've provided here, the hints of underlying incidents, the variances in the connection between John and Ace. I enjoyed every minute of their conversation, and would have been happy to read pages more of it. Brava!